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Post by Kristina on Aug 4, 2007 1:20:43 GMT -5
I figured a poetry/song thread should go in art, yeah? Who here likes to write poems or songs? I love writing both, and if anyone's interested I may post some But if any of you write them I'd love to see what you've come up with ;D
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Post by Kristina on Aug 4, 2007 12:35:31 GMT -5
lol. Here's one I wrote last night...it may actually be one of my best ones
Silent Tears
3 AM and I I lie here awake Thinkin' of you and it gets me high But it also makes Makes my heart ache
You and I, we're so near But we're so far away For you, I shed my silent tears As I long for you day after day
I'll wait another year Even two or three But in the meantime my dear, I hope you don't see The silent tears that fall Reflecting me
You and I, we're so near But we're so far away For you, I shed my silent tears As I long for you day after day
As the day drag on I'm coming undone But I'm holding on Yeah, I'm holding on
You and I, we're so near But we're so far away For you, I shed my silent tears As I long for you day after day
*For a little background, I wrote it because it basically describes how I feel right now. The guy I love lives 3 states away and isn't coming here until next year or maybe not even until 2009 so that's what inspired it.*
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Post by Kristina on Aug 4, 2007 21:32:51 GMT -5
oh so sad, and very good, lol do you play an instrument too? thanks! Yeah I mainly play piano and guitar but other random instruments too lol
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Post by Kristina on Aug 4, 2007 21:33:15 GMT -5
ok, my gf wrote this for me, lol, let me know if its song lyrics decaying in your arms,dont have to worry about self harm,ill see you in the stars I don't think it's song lyrics?
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Post by ~CrusaDora~ on Aug 4, 2007 22:07:53 GMT -5
ok, my gf wrote this for me, lol, let me know if its song lyrics decaying in your arms,dont have to worry about self harm,ill see you in the stars No I dont think it is either.
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Post by Kristina on Aug 5, 2007 0:01:28 GMT -5
Wow Crusadora, I really like your song ;D It's very good...your song captures the feeling of unrequited love very well.
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Post by ~CrusaDora~ on Aug 6, 2007 5:23:11 GMT -5
Wow Crusadora, I really like your song ;D It's very good...your song captures the feeling of unrequited love very well. Lol thanx...I hope its good.....well its the first song i have ever written anyway. lol BTW ur poem/song is also very good. I like the feelings u try to express there. Good JOb!
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Post by worcnagrom on Aug 12, 2007 22:26:22 GMT -5
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Post by worcnagrom on Aug 12, 2007 23:47:07 GMT -5
Hey I just added a new catagory to my site called songs.
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Post by worcnagrom on Aug 12, 2007 23:48:02 GMT -5
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Post by worcnagrom on Aug 13, 2007 11:54:12 GMT -5
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Post by Thor34 on Aug 15, 2007 18:07:07 GMT -5
Wow, maybe I should use that for my writing evaluation this year. That's pretty good...
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Post by Thor34 on Aug 15, 2007 21:18:45 GMT -5
Alright, I'll have to come up with my own, too bad.
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Post by worcnagrom on Aug 15, 2007 22:36:21 GMT -5
can i put it on Jiveroom
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Post by kar98 on Aug 15, 2007 22:42:47 GMT -5
go ahead mate, just give me credit for it
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