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Post by worcnagrom on Aug 16, 2007 12:27:52 GMT -5
Ok but I'll need a title. Is the title, "kind of long"
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Post by Kristina on Aug 20, 2007 20:35:31 GMT -5
wow that is really long lol. But it's interesting.
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Post by Kristina on Aug 22, 2007 16:34:54 GMT -5
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Post by Kristina on Aug 22, 2007 18:22:34 GMT -5
Ooh, I'm sorry lol. You shoulda said that.
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Post by Kristina on Aug 27, 2007 1:36:12 GMT -5
Do you have anymore? The ones you've posted so far are quite interesting.
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Post by worcnagrom on Sept 7, 2007 20:46:13 GMT -5
One Day In Orbitville A Sonnet By M.D. Crow
One day in Orbitville I cry at night. To the one who left me lying up above. It seems like I've fallen out of sight. Like they say, "In like a lion, Out like a dove."
Hear the eagles and larks cry out. As I black my eyes with my fist. upon this horse I'm about to mount. I never thought it would end up like this.
Oh, the thought of my deadly rage, as I lie down on the tracks below. I'm afraid this will take another page. My work is done, the final seed has been sewn.
In regards to you this letter is closed and sealed. A piece of my heart lies back in Orbitville.
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Post by worcnagrom on Sept 11, 2007 22:09:55 GMT -5
Okay I didn't write this but its pretty cool. you can listen to it on Jiveroom. www.jiveroom.tk Its and english round. ORIGINAL MIDDLE ENGLISH LYRICS: Svmer is icumen in Lhude sing cuccu! Groweþ sed and bloweþ med and springþ þe wde nu. Sing cuccu! Awe bleteþ after lomb, lhouþ after calue cu, Bulluc sterteþ, bucke uerteþ. Murie sing cuccu! Cuccu, cuccu, Wel singes þu cuccu. ne swik þu nauer nu! Sing cuccu nu, Sing cuccu! MODERN ENGLISH TRANSLATION: Summer has come in Loudly sing, cuckoo! Seeds grow and meadows bloom and the woods spring anew Sing cuckoo! Ewe bleats after lamb, Calf lows after cow, Bullock leaps, billygoat farts, Merrily sing, cuckoo! Cuckoo, cuckoo! Well you sing cuckoo, Nor cease you ever now! Sing cuckoo now, Sing, cuckoo! even thought summer is not hear any more.
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Post by www on Sept 13, 2007 11:09:07 GMT -5
The golden birch-tree grove has fallen silent Its merry chatter having stopped afore, The cranes up there flying over, sullen, Have nobody to pity any more. Whom should they pity? Each is just a trotter. One comes and goes and leaves for good again. The moon and hempen bush above the water Remember all those perished, filled with pain. I"m standing on the plain all on my own, The cranes, the wind is taking them away, I think about my boyhood which has flown, And I do not regret my bygones anyway. I don"t regret the days that I discarded, I don"t feel sorry for the lilac of my soul. The purple rowan burning in the garden Can"t warm and comfort anyone at all. The rowan will maintain its coloration. The grass exposed to heat will not decease, I drop my words of sorrow and vexation The way a tree drops quietly its leaves. And if some day the wind of time intended To rake them all up in a useless roll... You ought to say: the golden grove has ended Its lovely chatter in the prime of fall.
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Post by mizzlizrepugnant on Sept 15, 2007 23:27:10 GMT -5
At a rowan red, at me in a garden The nightingale marvelously, joyfully sings he irritate a soul, the song onself Vociferously, sonorously about love sings As to me clearly, song of a nightingale Ah the love is beautiful, as well as his song
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Post by Kristina on Sept 18, 2007 12:50:19 GMT -5
This is an unfinished song...what do you guys think?
And Then We Fell Apart
I’m standing here Staring at the broken pieces It’s never been more clear As everything we know ceases
I can’t believe we’re here Wondering how it all went wrong Maybe we were overtaken by fear Maybe we never did belong
Everything I knew Existed ‘cause of you You lit up my world It was too good to be true I loved you from the start And then we fell apart
I'm not sure what inspired it. The title just kept sticking in my head and I was like "I need to write that down" lol ;D
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Post by Kristina on Sept 19, 2007 15:54:06 GMT -5
Thank you ;D ;D
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Post by internetman on Sept 27, 2007 0:08:42 GMT -5
I so have understood it about love?
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