Post by x_x BoNeLaB x_x on Feb 7, 2008 23:29:26 GMT -5
My story is called Darkened World as you can see umm im writing this coz im bored it's not finished yet.
Im a bad speller and i suck at grammar so read at your own risk lol.
Warning also contains some gore
The world was such a happy place to be it seemed that nothing could happen to the planet or the people that inhabited it that was until a day that no one will ever forget the day the world plunged in to darkness the day where demons and creatures of the darkness and nightmares were no longer myth but reality the day light shriveled away and darkness thrived. War was upon earth not by man but by mans fears. The dead rose and ghastly beasts thrived in the streets spirits with no limit to there rage roamed the city’s what was once a beautiful planet was now a wasteland that smelt of decay and death.
Nothing could have prepared Joe and his gf Anna for this as they ran down the street swet dripping from there faces as it seemed the row of burning houses and corpse littered streets had no end to it. They finally reached a corner when they herd a blood curdling scream they stopped dead in there tracks and slowly hid behind a tree panting and exhausted they poked there weary heads around the tree to see what had made the sound it was Amy and Jessica, Anna ran out to meet them but Joe tried to pull her down but her boney hands slipped from his grip Amy and Jessica saw Anna and started running towards her before they could say anything there was a huge crash that startled the girls Joe yelled RUN!! darn it Anna, Anna gasped as a hulking shadow jumped from a burning building spreading fiery wood all over the streets and landing on a car the beasts force was so great that when it landed it seemed to have snapped the car in 2 sending the doors flying off there hinges and glass littering the ground like deadly sprinkles the beast roared in anger and stepped off the car grabbed it by the boot end crushing the metal like it was paper and flinging the car in to a burning house.
Anna, Jessica and Amy all watched in terror as this “thing” stepped out of the shadows and in to the burning light it’s grotesque appearance startled the 4 as it did not walk on it’s hind legs it moved like a gorilla with 2 muscular arms supporting a muscular torso the beast growled and slowly headed towards them Anna screamed in horror as it did not have a head instead replacing it was a gaping mouth with rows and rows of needle sharp teeth, the teeth shone in the fires eerie light it’s hulking body rising as it tumbled down, beating the ground with its fists it’s claws piercing through the ground like a hot knife through butter the beast turned and ran with amazing speed considering it was running on it’s fists it lunged up and jumped on a house it growled and smashed a hole in the roof while it was occupied Anna, Jessica and Amy snuck to where Joe was once they were there they herd a scream they quickly turned to see the hulking, skinless brute holding up what seemed like a girl.
Joe gasped in horror we have to help her said Jessica with a shaky voice what can we do against something like that snapped Joe as Joe and Jessica argued they herd a roar of anger they turned there were now 2 of those skinless abominations they were fighting over the girl throwing her around like a rag doll and fighting each other over her they watched in horror as one of them grabbed her by the head the other grabbed her by the legs and were tugging violently the 4 sat there trembling blocking there ears from the agonizing screams of the young teenage girl and then the scream turned to gurgles as the girls head was almost completely torn off her throat ripped open by the long claws blood was gushing from her throat and mouth as her eyes rolled back in to her head the movement turned to twitching as the beast’s tore her in half blood gushed down on to the street intestines flopping out of the now motionless torso as the beast’s flung there share high up in the air and engulfing it hole.
The gurgling screams stuck in Joe's head he cringed as the 3 girls sat there trying no to scream and cry in panic. They herd a screech as they looked ahead the 2 beasts ran to the other end of street as something landed in the middle of the big puddle of blood.
Joe still shaken got up and ran to the middle of the street Anna, Jessica and Amy clumsily following all they could see was a spinney back bent over the puddle of blood cringing as it slurped the blood up Amy stepped back and stepped on a peace of rotten wood the creature looked up and turned around Amy screamed and ran the remaining free gasping in horror the creature had no eyes but two holes where its eyes were meant to be within the holes 2 slimy tubes were poking out of the holes blood dripping down the tubes mouths the creature had no hands nor feet only stumps as Joe turned to run a ear splitting screech killed the silence he looked around as more of these “things” jumped near the blood puddle there had to be at least 5 of them now they nodded there heads back and ford then to Joe's surprise the creatures turned around and started to slurp the puddle of blood again Joe ran with Jessica and Anna not far behind him.
Im a bad speller and i suck at grammar so read at your own risk lol.
Warning also contains some gore
The world was such a happy place to be it seemed that nothing could happen to the planet or the people that inhabited it that was until a day that no one will ever forget the day the world plunged in to darkness the day where demons and creatures of the darkness and nightmares were no longer myth but reality the day light shriveled away and darkness thrived. War was upon earth not by man but by mans fears. The dead rose and ghastly beasts thrived in the streets spirits with no limit to there rage roamed the city’s what was once a beautiful planet was now a wasteland that smelt of decay and death.
Nothing could have prepared Joe and his gf Anna for this as they ran down the street swet dripping from there faces as it seemed the row of burning houses and corpse littered streets had no end to it. They finally reached a corner when they herd a blood curdling scream they stopped dead in there tracks and slowly hid behind a tree panting and exhausted they poked there weary heads around the tree to see what had made the sound it was Amy and Jessica, Anna ran out to meet them but Joe tried to pull her down but her boney hands slipped from his grip Amy and Jessica saw Anna and started running towards her before they could say anything there was a huge crash that startled the girls Joe yelled RUN!! darn it Anna, Anna gasped as a hulking shadow jumped from a burning building spreading fiery wood all over the streets and landing on a car the beasts force was so great that when it landed it seemed to have snapped the car in 2 sending the doors flying off there hinges and glass littering the ground like deadly sprinkles the beast roared in anger and stepped off the car grabbed it by the boot end crushing the metal like it was paper and flinging the car in to a burning house.
Anna, Jessica and Amy all watched in terror as this “thing” stepped out of the shadows and in to the burning light it’s grotesque appearance startled the 4 as it did not walk on it’s hind legs it moved like a gorilla with 2 muscular arms supporting a muscular torso the beast growled and slowly headed towards them Anna screamed in horror as it did not have a head instead replacing it was a gaping mouth with rows and rows of needle sharp teeth, the teeth shone in the fires eerie light it’s hulking body rising as it tumbled down, beating the ground with its fists it’s claws piercing through the ground like a hot knife through butter the beast turned and ran with amazing speed considering it was running on it’s fists it lunged up and jumped on a house it growled and smashed a hole in the roof while it was occupied Anna, Jessica and Amy snuck to where Joe was once they were there they herd a scream they quickly turned to see the hulking, skinless brute holding up what seemed like a girl.
Joe gasped in horror we have to help her said Jessica with a shaky voice what can we do against something like that snapped Joe as Joe and Jessica argued they herd a roar of anger they turned there were now 2 of those skinless abominations they were fighting over the girl throwing her around like a rag doll and fighting each other over her they watched in horror as one of them grabbed her by the head the other grabbed her by the legs and were tugging violently the 4 sat there trembling blocking there ears from the agonizing screams of the young teenage girl and then the scream turned to gurgles as the girls head was almost completely torn off her throat ripped open by the long claws blood was gushing from her throat and mouth as her eyes rolled back in to her head the movement turned to twitching as the beast’s tore her in half blood gushed down on to the street intestines flopping out of the now motionless torso as the beast’s flung there share high up in the air and engulfing it hole.
The gurgling screams stuck in Joe's head he cringed as the 3 girls sat there trying no to scream and cry in panic. They herd a screech as they looked ahead the 2 beasts ran to the other end of street as something landed in the middle of the big puddle of blood.
Joe still shaken got up and ran to the middle of the street Anna, Jessica and Amy clumsily following all they could see was a spinney back bent over the puddle of blood cringing as it slurped the blood up Amy stepped back and stepped on a peace of rotten wood the creature looked up and turned around Amy screamed and ran the remaining free gasping in horror the creature had no eyes but two holes where its eyes were meant to be within the holes 2 slimy tubes were poking out of the holes blood dripping down the tubes mouths the creature had no hands nor feet only stumps as Joe turned to run a ear splitting screech killed the silence he looked around as more of these “things” jumped near the blood puddle there had to be at least 5 of them now they nodded there heads back and ford then to Joe's surprise the creatures turned around and started to slurp the puddle of blood again Joe ran with Jessica and Anna not far behind him.