Post by lolage on Jan 9, 2008 16:56:20 GMT -5
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""…i got something for you, before I died of course; I just forgot to show it to you, I don't want this to be awkward..." her cheeks turned red,
He had never heard her talk so fast.""
Start of page 3
He had never heard her talk so fast.
"Leslie, I need to tell you something..." Jess was stopped by a nervous Leslie.
"And I need to show you something".
Finally she climbed up the tree and went to the highest part, she struggled to get something out of the wiry branch, and then she pulled it out so hard that it fell down all the way to Jess, he grabbed it.
He scrolled his eyes upon the heart shaped box and then he read the little card beside it, it was the scruffy writing of Leslie saying: "Jess, I've never had the courage to say how I really feel about you, if I'd ever said I love you, you would always think of it as a best friend thing, but Jess it's not..".
He looked up to the tree and looked at Leslie, he suddenly realised that possibly he might feel the same way.
He slipped the card into his pocket fast before Leslie came and he opened the box.
He saw beautiful homemade bracelet, he smiled, and then she came.
"Did you read the card?" she seemed as though she wanted him to see it.
"Um, no it must have got lost, when it fell..."
"Oh right, like the present?" she then was trying to stop the awkwardness and she laughed and tackled him to the floor
They both were laughing and then when she touched his hand he felt something, something he had never felt before, it was like light butterflies in his stomach, then he remembered when he asked his dad a long time ago, what love was like, his dad said it was like butterflies in his stomach, just what Jess felt, was it possible that he loved Leslie?.
They both then were lying on the floor looking up to the sky, and Jess decided that it was his turn to be nice. He held her hand and they both looked at each other and smiled.
Leslie then waited for a bit and quickly added "You really should have read the card, I can't tell you on my own"
Jess knew exactly what she meant, and he was just about to kiss her when Jess' family and media came screaming in and they looked horrified and shocked. The media were taking pictures and it was all too much for Jess and Leslie.
Jess' mum said with a weak voice "Jess? What is… Leslie?" she rolled her eyes back and fell to the ground, Jess quickly stood up with Leslie and they both ran to his mum.
Leslie didn't notice that everyone was staring, she just carried on and said
"she's breathing"
Finally someone said what everyone was thinking
"How are YOU breathing? Aren't you meant to be dead?"
She forgot about that and she added "well I thought I was dead, and I think Jess brought me back to life..."
"WELL! Do your parents know?" Leslie looked really nervous and sad, she never liked much attention.
Jess saw her face and he quickly added "just leave her alone, she doesn't know what's happening either" Jess hoped the silence would last for longer, but a few seconds later they started shouting again. Leslie grabbed onto Jess for protection, but that was no good. Soon the reporters came rushing in with cameras, and they were asking them questions and trying to drag them away.
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I dont know if the guy is gonna send me more pages. I can always request them if i want to, though, do you guys want more ?
Or is it a bad story...
""…i got something for you, before I died of course; I just forgot to show it to you, I don't want this to be awkward..." her cheeks turned red,
He had never heard her talk so fast.""
Start of page 3
He had never heard her talk so fast.
"Leslie, I need to tell you something..." Jess was stopped by a nervous Leslie.
"And I need to show you something".
Finally she climbed up the tree and went to the highest part, she struggled to get something out of the wiry branch, and then she pulled it out so hard that it fell down all the way to Jess, he grabbed it.
He scrolled his eyes upon the heart shaped box and then he read the little card beside it, it was the scruffy writing of Leslie saying: "Jess, I've never had the courage to say how I really feel about you, if I'd ever said I love you, you would always think of it as a best friend thing, but Jess it's not..".
He looked up to the tree and looked at Leslie, he suddenly realised that possibly he might feel the same way.
He slipped the card into his pocket fast before Leslie came and he opened the box.
He saw beautiful homemade bracelet, he smiled, and then she came.
"Did you read the card?" she seemed as though she wanted him to see it.
"Um, no it must have got lost, when it fell..."
"Oh right, like the present?" she then was trying to stop the awkwardness and she laughed and tackled him to the floor
They both were laughing and then when she touched his hand he felt something, something he had never felt before, it was like light butterflies in his stomach, then he remembered when he asked his dad a long time ago, what love was like, his dad said it was like butterflies in his stomach, just what Jess felt, was it possible that he loved Leslie?.
They both then were lying on the floor looking up to the sky, and Jess decided that it was his turn to be nice. He held her hand and they both looked at each other and smiled.
Leslie then waited for a bit and quickly added "You really should have read the card, I can't tell you on my own"
Jess knew exactly what she meant, and he was just about to kiss her when Jess' family and media came screaming in and they looked horrified and shocked. The media were taking pictures and it was all too much for Jess and Leslie.
Jess' mum said with a weak voice "Jess? What is… Leslie?" she rolled her eyes back and fell to the ground, Jess quickly stood up with Leslie and they both ran to his mum.
Leslie didn't notice that everyone was staring, she just carried on and said
"she's breathing"
Finally someone said what everyone was thinking
"How are YOU breathing? Aren't you meant to be dead?"
She forgot about that and she added "well I thought I was dead, and I think Jess brought me back to life..."
"WELL! Do your parents know?" Leslie looked really nervous and sad, she never liked much attention.
Jess saw her face and he quickly added "just leave her alone, she doesn't know what's happening either" Jess hoped the silence would last for longer, but a few seconds later they started shouting again. Leslie grabbed onto Jess for protection, but that was no good. Soon the reporters came rushing in with cameras, and they were asking them questions and trying to drag them away.
End of page 3 .....
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I dont know if the guy is gonna send me more pages. I can always request them if i want to, though, do you guys want more ?
Or is it a bad story...