Zenythmon
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Post by Zenythmon on Apr 1, 2007 15:00:07 GMT -5
I have compiled all of the current wallpapers shown thus far into one wallpaper. i129.photobucket.com/albums/p203/Zenythmon/ASR.jpgI don't know much about this website you're using to store your images, but I particularly like Photobucket. www.photobucket.comDo you think you could hyperlink the ones that don't have hyperlinks? So that they can be enlarged in case one of us would like to apply it to our own desktops?
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face
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Post by face on Apr 22, 2007 9:34:19 GMT -5
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Post by 4ever-loeed on Jun 4, 2007 12:07:22 GMT -5
great!
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lich
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Post by lich on Nov 7, 2007 3:54:36 GMT -5
i like these -_-
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Post by modmike on Feb 20, 2008 15:31:54 GMT -5
Nice wallpapers! And Welcome back ;D
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Post by Paperchase on Feb 23, 2008 10:43:54 GMT -5
Sorry friend, but I didn't like it. It is inexpressive, boring and grey. Also it have low resolution and like wall-paper be fit only in a mobile phone
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Post by Paperchase on Feb 26, 2008 3:25:31 GMT -5
Sorry friend, but I didn't like it. It is inexpressive, boring and grey. Also it have low resolution and like wall-paper be fit only in a mobile phone Personally, I quite like it. A wallpaper sometimes has to be simple to look good. I get your point of there being too many blank spaces, but that puts maximum focus on the face, which is good. If there are too many things on a piece, then it starts to look very cluttered. And a mobile phone wallpaper isn't a bad thing. Face, this is absolutely non-offensive, constructive criticism- the first wallpaper is the one I like most- the general simplicity and style is innocently attractive, and the text and the small twirly image works very well. However, since there is nothing else to relate to it- as in other patterns and textures- it looks a little blank around the edges and overly-smooth in general. The picture of AnnaSophia is well-picked, the size covers more blank space effectively, and the grey-and-white effect is well-used, but due to the fact that everything else is also grey, no contrast is provided to the whole wallpaper. That means that there is no obvious focus, which deprives the visual purpose of the artwork. Pick something that you want your viewer to see, and then bring it out either by sharpening or colouring the image, or adding more things around it so that there is something to contrast against it. The second wallpaper had a lot more contrast in, and that's good. The main problem is the headshot of AnnaSophia- it stands out a little too well. Perhaps you could try softening the image a little so that it blends in a little nicer, since the shadows and highlights on her face are bringing it out a little too sharply against the softer background. You could also try a tint with the same colour as the rest of the wallpaper as well. The size of the picture also is a little on the small size, meaning there is a large amount of painfully noticeable large space. Instead of making the image larger, I suggest texturising the background so that the empty space doesn't look so smooth. But once again, your borders and text are very good, and reflect AnnaSophia beautifully. I think the two wallpapers you did didn't take you a very long time to do, so I'm guessing that if you spend a lot more time you'd come up with a much better artwork. And remember, this is NOT trying to flame you- I'm trying to use what minimal artistic abilites I have to say- in my opinion- how you could make it better. But I'm sure that if you spent more time on it, it would be infintely better
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Post by Paperchase on Feb 26, 2008 13:14:18 GMT -5
Wow, you are high resolution person! You expound; correctly, competently, skilfully, and with taste I think you artist, designer or something like that?
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Post by Paperchase on Feb 26, 2008 16:36:42 GMT -5
Wow, you are high resolution person! You expound; correctly, competently, skilfully, and with taste I think you artist, designer or something like that? Ehehe... no, I'm not anything like that. I'm primarily an author/songwriter/singer. Plus, I'm still just a high school student, and I just happen to do a few sketches when I'm bored in class. Really, my opinion's nothing compared to a lot of people- I'm sure that they'll have a lot better advice to give than me.
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